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Post by Night Star on May 9, 2005 22:23:42 GMT -5
Here is one that i wrote tonight Depression The darkness inside grows I am unsure of why its really there I have this huge lonelyness inside To prove the darkness and trying to make the pain equal I have scars up and down my wrist and shoulders The scars grow more and more each night I can`t stop the pain I hate my life and myself I am a dead soul Now a days I wonder through the halls of that ... School building that I heardly underst and anymore I am like a shadow on the walls through-out the day Why won`t it go away? I am runing away from it yet it keeps catching up .... with me
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Post by Drachestahl on May 16, 2005 15:30:00 GMT -5
Damn....very touching and dark.
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Post by Night Star on Jun 2, 2005 21:31:52 GMT -5
My dperession poem has got in to the simi finals of a poetry contest
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Post by Drachestahl on Jun 17, 2005 12:12:33 GMT -5
wow. Not even my best RL friends like my poems. *Mutters* Stuck up thick homophobic anti-Goth RnB lovers.
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Post by Night Star on Jun 20, 2005 18:40:45 GMT -5
oh by the way my fan fiction is finshed
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Post by Drachestahl on Jun 21, 2005 9:04:06 GMT -5
Yay!
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Post by Night Star on Jul 23, 2005 22:03:52 GMT -5
That poem also got editors choice
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Garland
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Post by Garland on Jul 23, 2005 22:06:09 GMT -5
I find depressing poems exceedinly bo~oring... How about your write something BRIGHT for a change.. or something romanitic.. you sad little mesochistic sadistic little girl
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Post by Drachestahl on Jul 23, 2005 22:06:57 GMT -5
Dammnit! At least God loves you! ;D lol
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Post by Night Star on Jul 23, 2005 22:10:39 GMT -5
There is no god in which i worship. I am not sadtic eieter
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Post by Garland on Jul 23, 2005 22:13:50 GMT -5
Like Hell you arn't sadistic... I know you personally, and well.. you're sadistic but you're a cream-puff, a wet-nose, a greenhorn, a N3W8 at it..
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Post by Drachestahl on Jul 23, 2005 22:16:25 GMT -5
Hey hey hey! If ANYONE'S the sado-masochist of this forum I am! Anyway why SHOULD she have to write something happy? Poetry is a form of expression. It's not like fake manufactured pop-songs. If that's how she feels she has every right to write about it.
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Post by Night Star on Jul 23, 2005 22:18:50 GMT -5
* knees Garland in the nuts* I was depressed when i wrote that idiot and i writei dark things
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Post by Garland on Jul 23, 2005 22:19:30 GMT -5
Twas only a suggestion my dear, only an inclination to do so, despite I stopped making short stories and poems for a while
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Post by Night Star on Jul 23, 2005 22:25:43 GMT -5
I have not write anything in a while nor do i care if i write anything i have done a few drawings but that is it
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